I only caught 1 typo - “I'm not, you're smiling at me like some dime-novel evil overlord waiting for the drug to kick in,” Ed sat back again and folded his arms. “You are really worried about me trouncing you aren't you? AND before we get this started I want to hear form your mouth Ran Fan stays out of it.”
- should be from.

And YAY! for getting Roy to do alchemy.